Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving. Discuss the arguments for and against keeping pets. To what extent do you agree?

There are many amazing travel destinations in the world that
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unique
expriences
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experiences
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in France, Cappa Docia in Turkey, Coluseium in Italy
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Burj Khalifa in UAE.
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is quite different. Since I was 13 years old, I have always dreamt of visiting The Wave, located in Arizona.It is
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unique and stunning desert landscape that seems almost unreal when you see it for the first time Visiting The Wave involves some steps. To get access, you need to apply for a lottery ticket, which costs $9. If
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your side and you win you will have the
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opportunity
to travel to
this
gorheous
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gorgeous
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recommended to visit there during
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seasons So if
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got a chance to visit The Wave,
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would have agreed without any hesitation
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