The chart shows requests for information at a tourists office in the United Kingdom from January to June
The chart illustrates
requests
for data
at a tourist center
in the UK between Change the spelling
centre
January
to June.
Overall
, the applications for information in person
and by telephone shows
a dramatic rise in a Correct subject-verb agreement
show
6 months
Correct your spelling
6-month
period
. While
applications for data
by letter/email decreased slightly over the period
of time.
It can be clearly seen that requests
in person
started at 400 pieces requests
in January
and it has rocketed to 1900 requests
in June exceeding all other types of requests
. At the same time applications by telephone began at 900 in January
and witnessed a significant increase over 6 months finishing at 1600 in June. Regarding the requests
by letter/email
it was higher than Add a comma
,email
requests
for data
in person
in January
, at 790 and the number halved during the period
ending at 395
In conclusion, two types of requests
such
as in person
and by telephone for the data
have been going up for a given time of
Change preposition
apply
period
. While
, request
by letter/email slowly went down till May, after that it Fix the agreement mistake
requests
has
settled the level off in 2 monthsUnnecessary verb
apply
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