Some students do very well at school and never have problems while others fall behind. Are they capable of handling this challenge themselves or should teachers and parents help them? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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study excellently at school and never have any

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other

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fail. From my point of view, some people believe that are they able to learn by themself,

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think that parents and

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provide support and guidance. In the following paragraph, both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached. Certainly,

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have different learning styles, abilities and methods. I believe that some

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will help themself to pass through

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during the period of learning.

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, when I studying for my Bachelor's degree

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3 years ago, I person who studied very hard and I

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worked and collected my tuition fees by myself . I supported myself during the period of studying for my Bachelor's degree. I did not want support from my family because my mom was old she did not have a job and sometimes she got sick. I believe that some

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me they can do excellent at school and

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by themselves. If I find hardly a question from my assignment. I will find answers from Google or the library so that family is not necessary for me.

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, some people suggest that some

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study excellently at

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because collaboration between parents, siblings,

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and

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can lead to better academic performance. Some people believe that

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or family they can create motivation to boost student's confidence when they learning. If some

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have

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with assignments or research

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can provide the necessary advice to pass through their

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.

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, with that help from

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and family

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can lead to better academic performance. In conclusion, these two opinions on studying well at

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are capable of handling

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challenge themselves or should

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and parents help them

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It is still a very personal question to discuss.