The quality of healthcare a person received should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of healthcare for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree?

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The provided table illustrates data regarding

milk’s

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production

per

year

in four countries in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.

Overall

, the majority of

milk’s

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milk

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production

per

year

in 1990, 2000, and 2010 was in the

Netherlands

While

Guatemala

has at least produced

milk

per

year

in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010, It is apparent that the

Netherlands

produced the most

milk

annually in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010, followed by Australia,

Tanzania

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and Tanzania

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, and the least produced

milk

per

year

Guatemala

. The

Netherlands

produced the most

milk

in 2000. Australia produced the most

milk

in 1990,

then

slightly decreased in 2000 and 2010.

Tanzanisa

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Tanzania

produced at least

milk

in 1990,

then

slightly increased in 2000 and 2010.

Lastly

Guatemala

produced at least some

milk

annually between the four countries.

However

, the

production

milk

Guatemala

dramatically rose in 2000 and 2010.

In addition

, the

production

milk

annually in

Guatemala

significantly rose from 26,000

liters

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in 1990 to 55,000

liters

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in 2000 and still increased to 84,000

liters

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year

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2010.

While

the

production

milk

annually in Australia slightly decreased from 11,246,000

liters

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in 1990 to 9,165,000 in 2010,

Furthermore

, The

Netherlands

was the country that produced the most

milk

annually, at 11,262,000

liters

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in 1990, and slightly rose to 11,155,000

liters

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in 2000.

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The quality of healthcare a person received should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of healthcare for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree?

Fully explain your ideas

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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