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You are supposed to submit a history project by 11th November. However, your sister is getting married in Hawaii at the same time. You would like an extension on the due date for submitting the project. Write to your professor. In your letter: explain the situation, remind the professor of your excellent academic record to date, ask for an extension of the due date.

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Dear John Shan, I am writing
this
 letter to you to request you to
acclerate
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accelerate
 the
submittion
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submission
 date of my History project, because of some consequences that are going to happened on the same day. Actually, my sibling is going to get married on 11
November
. I talked about
this
 to my parents and they mentioned that they booked flight tickets already.
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 is quite big, they are unable to change the schedule. All the guests are invited. I am a bright student. I had done all my projects and tests
punchually
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punctually
. My
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 are high all the time among the whole class. I never gave any excuse to
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 to get rid of
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. I would request you to extend my History project date from 11
November
 to 15
November
. My family members and I will return
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home by 14
November
. So I can do my exam
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 the very next of
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. I look
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forward
 to hearing from you. Your Sincerely. Harpreet Kaur.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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