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You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: ·Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner · Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit

#studies #month #haven #time #visit #grandmother #·apologize #touch
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Dear my grandmother I am writing
this
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 letter
finding
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to find
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 you great . I hope to have the best time with my grandfather.
However
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 ,I miss you so much ,but unfortunately , cannot visit you
this
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 month I am so apologize to
here
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hear
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 that ,because ,our tutor
want
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wants
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 to take two
exams
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 . In
fact
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 these
exams
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 are
horrible
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horribly
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 hard ,so I have to spend more time in our accommodation with my classmates until we can have more effort to practice and study.
Hence
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 , after
a months
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months
a month
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 and
pass
Wrong verb form
passing
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 my
exams
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 , I am going to
have
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take
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trip
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a trip
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 to your house for 2 weeks on
holidays
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holiday
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. Actually , I am so happy to visit you
sooner
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soon
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. I will try to book
train
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a train
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 ticket in the morning of
latest
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the latest
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 Wednesday of
this
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 month . I want to you pry to me for acquisition
satisfide
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satisfied
 results in my
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. Lovely Janet
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greeting and closing
Make sure to address your grandmother properly at the beginning of the letter.
task achievement
Explain in more detail the reasons why you haven't been able to visit your family.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in separate paragraphs to improve coherence and clarity.
lexical resource
Use more varied and descriptive vocabulary to enhance your writing.
grammatical range and accuracy
Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to improve accuracy.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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