Task 1: The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.

Task 1: The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.
The pictorial flow depicts the steps required to produce chocolate.
Overall
, there are six methods needed to harvest and deliver
cocoa
beans
and an additional four stages to process them into the final product in the factory. Focusing on the harvesting phase, most
cocoa
trees are cultivated in America, Africa, and Indonesia. Only the ripe red pods are eligible to be harvested because of the quality of
cocoa
beans
they innate.
Thereafter
, picked
beans
are fermented and diversified in the sun to dry. Those dried
beans
then
are collected in large sacks to be delivered by train or lorry to the manufacturing site. After being taken to the factory,
beans
are roasted at a very high temperature at the roastery site.
Next,
the roasted
beans
are crushed to remove their outer shells.
Finally
, the extraction of the chocolate liquid is performed by pressing those
cocoa
beans
inner part. To summarise, each one of the steps is valuable to give us liquid chocolate as required produce.
Moreover
, if there are missed one of the phases will fill the hull
prosses
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and the accuracy of quality.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cocoa, beans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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