.In some countries more and more people are hiring a personal trainer ,rather than plying sports or doing exercise classes what are reasons for this ,is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays people
busy
in their Add a missing verb
are busy
life
. As a result
, folk forget about their healthy life
. Therefore
, they need to do physical activities
day by day. However
, humans do not have time
to attend the
Correct article usage
apply
sports
or exercises
by Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
them
Correct your spelling
themself
themselves
self
. Thus
, this
era some Change preposition
in this
countries
required personal trainer
. When I take Fix the agreement mistake
trainers
in to
account, Correct your spelling
into
this
conditions are bring to positive development for community Change the determiner
these
life
. In my point of view, I am going to explain with relevant examples.
On the one hand, currently
humans live Add a comma
currently,
in
Change preposition
apply
busy
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a busy
the busy
life
. If they like attend
to the physical Add the particle
to attend
activities
they are unable to allocate the time
. As a result
, many countries
grow up
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have
peoples
, Fix the agreement mistake
people
diabetic
patients. Correct word choice
and diabetic
Due
to
, lots of Correct pronoun usage
to this
countries
hired
personal Wrong verb form
hire
trainer
. Fix the agreement mistake
trainers
For instance
, when I consider, shift working humans actually, they cannot fix the time
for exercise or any sports
doing them self
. However
, if they hired the
Correct article usage
a
trainer
might be fixed the time
. I would like to say, many
Correct word choice
that many
countries
hire physical trainer
Fix the agreement mistake
trainers
therefore
populations live in
busy Change preposition
apply
life
and Fix the agreement mistake
lives
enable
to attend physical Correct your spelling
are able
activities
by them
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themself
themselves
self
.
Secondly
, I would say, required
consultant for their exercise or Correct word choice
that required
sports
able
to get many positive developments. Usually, people are working with tight Add a missing verb
are able
time
schedules they are living in stressful life
. As a result
, many of them are suffering from diabetic
, hypertension…etc. Replace the word
diabetes
For instance
, take in to
account, diabetic Correct your spelling
into
patient
, always live in unhappy moods and Fix the agreement mistake
patients
they
do not Correct pronoun usage
apply
want
follow the doctor’s guidelines. Add the particle
want to
Thus
, when they take trainer
, Correct article usage
a trainer
want
to follow the Correct word choice
and want
teacher
instructionsChange noun form
teacher's
Rephrase
apply
finally
, they will be
recover and motivate them Unnecessary verb
apply
self
so much. Because
, previously I mentions when hired the Correct word choice
As
trainer
could be gets
so many developments for Change the verb form
get
the
society.
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apply
To conclude
, in my point of view these days situation healthy life
is more importance
. Unfortunately Replace the word
important
the
society does not have free Correct article usage
apply
time
to do physical activities
therefore
many counties
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countries
more
popular Add a missing verb
are more
hire
physical Fix the infinitive
to hire
trainer
. Fix the agreement mistake
trainers
Finally
doing exercise or any, sports
with proper
Add an article
a proper
trainer
have
more positive developments.Correct subject-verb agreement
has
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