the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2000

the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2000
The line chart illustrates the
number
of
people
travelling each day by
car
,
bus
as well
as
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and
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train over a 60-year period between 1970 and 2030.
It is clear that
the
car
is the most popular means of transport for UK
commuters
throughout the period shown.
In contrast
,
while
the proportions of
people
commuting by train and
bus
increase gradually, the
number
of
commuters
who use the
bus
on a daily basis decreases steadily. In 1970, approximately 5
million
UK
commuters
travelled by
car
on a daily basis,
while
users who commuted by
bus
and train
just
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were just
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around 4
million
and 2
million
respectively. In the year 2000, there was a considerable rise in the driving to work by
car
, at 7
million
people
and the
number
of commuting rail passengers witnessed a slight increase, with 3
million
.
However
, there was a small drop in travelling by
bus
around 0.5
million
people
. By 2030, travelling by
car
is expected to rise dramatically, about 9
million
commuters
.
Also
, the
number
of
people
using trains is predicted to reach nearly 5
million
in the same time period.
In contrast
, buses are predicted to become a less popular transport than others, falling by just under 3
million
users.
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