the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2000
The line chart illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
people
travelling each day by Use synonyms
car
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bus
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as well
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as
train over a 60-year period between 1970 and 2030.
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and
It is clear that
the Linking Words
car
is the most popular means of transport for UK Use synonyms
commuters
throughout the period shown. Use synonyms
In contrast
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while
the proportions of Linking Words
people
commuting by train and Use synonyms
bus
increase gradually, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
commuters
who use the Use synonyms
bus
on a daily basis decreases steadily.
In 1970, approximately 5 Use synonyms
million
UK Use synonyms
commuters
travelled by Use synonyms
car
on a daily basis, Use synonyms
while
users who commuted by Linking Words
bus
and train Use synonyms
just
around 4 Add a missing verb
were just
million
and 2 Use synonyms
million
respectively. In the year 2000, there was a considerable rise in the driving to work by Use synonyms
car
, at 7 Use synonyms
million
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people
and the Use synonyms
number
of commuting rail passengers witnessed a slight increase, with 3 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
However
, there was a small drop in travelling by Linking Words
bus
around 0.5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
people
.
By 2030, travelling by Use synonyms
car
is expected to rise dramatically, about 9 Use synonyms
million
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commuters
. Use synonyms
Also
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
using trains is predicted to reach nearly 5 Use synonyms
million
in the same time period. Use synonyms
In contrast
, buses are predicted to become a less popular transport than others, falling by just under 3 Linking Words
million
users.Use synonyms
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