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Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

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Nowadays, it is a controversial issue of imitating celebrities. Some young generations are increasingly willing to copy not only the behaviour but
also
 the
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 of well-known individuals. From my view of point, there are two reasons leading to
this
 situation.
Firstly
,
due to
 the invention of technology,
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more
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smart phones
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, young
people
 can easily search on
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the internet
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 to follow their idols.
Additionally
, those well-known
people
 can share their lifestyles and opinions through different methods.
Moreover
, they can even participate in the life of famous
people
 who
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 located far away from them via social
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,
such
 as Instagram, YouTube, and Twitter.
Secondly
, because of the commercialization, companies are requiring the influencers to post pictures on social
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 and to
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 some recommendation context in order to increase the sales of various
product
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.
For example
, DPA, a clothing brand famous for inviting different celebrities to conduct a hashtag event on social media, has become persuasive
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 selling fashion
cloths
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 by the share of well-known individuals. The imitation of these famous
people
 is
therefore
 a direct consequence of a natural human attraction to the advice of successful.
However
, there are still several negative impacts on young
people
 caused by the imitation of
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 of famous
people
.
To begin
 with,
people
 can only receive information from celebrities in their own country traditionally. Since the popularity of social
medias
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, individuals can be attracted by sports stars, K-Pop idols, movie stars, and so on, which means that they might be influenced by
people
 that
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 from different countries
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shared
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 distinct cultures.
Furthermore
,
people
 who lack
of
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company and are fascinated by these well-known
people
 will probably spend too much time
on
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watching social media seeking
for catching
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 fashion trend and spend a great number of funds on
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unessential products, which is promoted
by
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them.
For example
, young
people
 will buy posters of their
favorite
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 K-Pop idols or even spend money on
the
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concert carried out by them. In conclusion, the rise of social media has led
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the
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society recently, allowing young generations to achieve information in a short time. Though the imitation of young
people
 may do some harm to
themselves
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, there are still some benefits brought by influencers,
for instance
, Ray, an
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 YouTuber. How to recognize which
action
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actions
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 done by them are good and which are bad
that
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is a question.
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