Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

A group of people believe that
newspapers
play a key role
to get
Change preposition
in getting
show examples
news
. Another group believe that the other platforms are better to get
news
. In my opinion, using
another
Correct quantifier usage
other
show examples
media can be more
usefull
Correct your spelling
useful
them
Change the pronoun
their
show examples
news papers
Correct your spelling
newspapers
show examples
.
In
Change preposition
On
show examples
one
Correct article usage
the one
show examples
hand,
newspapers
are
trust worthy
Correct your spelling
trustworthy
show examples
way from
antient
Correct your spelling
ancient
times until now for public
informed
Replace the word
information
show examples
. In
fact
Add a comma
fact,
show examples
this
is recognised as a valid primary source
ground
Correct your spelling
around
show examples
the world. Journalists need to obtain a license for
news
reports
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
cause
Correct your spelling
because
show examples
they
represents
Change the verb form
represent
show examples
reliability and you can trust them. One of the advantages of getting
news
from
newspaper
Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
show examples
is the categories
news
Change preposition
of news
show examples
and
this
feature
facilities
Correct your spelling
facilitates
show examples
finding the specific
news
.
On the other hand
, thanks to technology, we access the latest
news
, on
the
Remove the article
apply
show examples
some
Correct your spelling
same
show examples
platforms and media
by
Change preposition
via
show examples
Correct article usage
the internet
show examples
internet
Capitalize word
Internet
show examples
immediataly
Correct your spelling
immediately
.
Although
this
way
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
conveinent
Correct your spelling
convenient
, but
requieres
Correct your spelling
requires
to ensure
Change the verb form
ensuring
show examples
for understanding
the
Change preposition
of the
show examples
true
Replace the word
truth
show examples
; Because someone can
makes
Change the verb form
make
show examples
fake
news
that
cause
Change the verb form
causes
show examples
people
cofused
Correct your spelling
confused
. Since the
newspapers
in
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
many
contries
Correct your spelling
countries
, press censorship,
so
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
people can’t trust them and they
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
inevitable
Change the word
inevitably
show examples
follow
news
by
Change preposition
from
show examples
media
Correct article usage
the media
show examples
. We have different types of
news
,
such
as video, image and voice.
Also
Add a comma
Also,
show examples
we can access
news
in various languages,
free
Change preposition
for free
show examples
. In conclusion,
newspapers
are
validable
Correct article usage
a validable
show examples
priority to get
news
,
however
, in my
prespevtive
Correct your spelling
perspective
, if we find broadcast credibility, we can follow the
news
through the platform with more confidence.
Submitted by siina.arabii on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
What to do next:
Look at other essays: