the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee
The table shows information about the Fairtrade labelled bananas and coffee
sales
comparing the years 1999 and 2004.
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Overall
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sales
of coffee increased from 1990 to 2004 in each country but the one that had the biggest rise was the UK, meanwhile, the data for the Use synonyms
sales
of bananas was relatively similar, there were some variances especially in Belgium and Sweden because the number of Use synonyms
sales
decreased.
Even though all the Use synonyms
sales
of countries that sold coffee went up, the figures for the UK increased significantly from 1.5 million in 1999 to 20 million in 2004, Use synonyms
while
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sales
for Denmark and Sweden did not grow as much, just 0.2 from 1.8 to 2 and 0.8 to 1 respectively. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
sales
in Switzerland and Denmark rose from 3 to 6 and 1 to 1.7 in 2004.
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However
, the Linking Words
sales
of bananas were less consistent, some countries presented positive numbers but others didn't . The UK had an important rise from 15 to 47, Switzerland from 1 to 5.5 and Denmark from 0.6 to 4, but the Use synonyms
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in other countries fell like Belgium from 1.8 to 1 and Sweden from 2 to 0.9.Use synonyms
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