the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee

the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee
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The table shows information about the Fairtrade labelled bananas and coffee
sales
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comparing the years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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the
sales
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of coffee increased from 1990 to 2004 in each country but the one that had the biggest rise was the UK, meanwhile, the data for the
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of bananas was relatively similar, there were some variances especially in Belgium and Sweden because the number of
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decreased. Even though all the
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of countries that sold coffee went up, the figures for the UK increased significantly from 1.5 million in 1999 to 20 million in 2004,
while
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the
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for Denmark and Sweden did not grow as much, just 0.2 from 1.8 to 2 and 0.8 to 1 respectively.
On the other hand
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,
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in Switzerland and Denmark rose from 3 to 6 and 1 to 1.7 in 2004.
However
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, the
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of bananas were less consistent, some countries presented positive numbers but others didn't . The UK had an important rise from 15 to 47, Switzerland from 1 to 5.5 and Denmark from 0.6 to 4, but the
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in other countries fell like Belgium from 1.8 to 1 and Sweden from 2 to 0.9.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • Fairtrade labeled
  • bananas
  • coffee
  • time period
  • trends
  • influence
  • consumers
  • farmers
  • communities
  • increase
  • products
  • labelling
  • sustainable
  • ethically sourced
  • global market
  • demand
  • awareness
  • certification
  • marketing strategies
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