The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the changes in the plan of the
museum
between 1998 and 2008.
Overall
,
It is clear that
the was built restaurant in a blank and convented temporary
exhibition
room. Some places were removed. In 1998, the
museum
had more space areas in north - west and
south - east
Add a hyphen
south-east
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. The
garden
is located in
centre
Add an article
the centre
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of the
museum
. The
garden
is located on top of the
garden
. In the south, there are temporary
exhibition
room, entrance, shop, toilet and wardrobe. Outside of the
museum
has
Verb problem
are
show examples
exhibition
rooms. After some developments in 2008, there have been some changes. In
north-west
Add an article
the north-west
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, empty places have been constructed
Change preposition
for restaurant
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restaurant
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
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. Wardrobe, shops and temporary rooms have been replaced from east to west. The toilet has been converted beside the cafe. The restaurant and wardrobe
locate
Wrong verb form
are located
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in the corner of the north and south-west respectively. The
garden
was erected sitting area and planted fountains. In the east absolutely demolished. The entrance and
exhibition
rooms haven't been modernized.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, exhibition, garden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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