The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the changes in the plan of the
museum
between 1998 and 2008.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
It is clear that
the was built restaurant in a blank and convented temporary Linking Words
exhibition
room. Some places were removed.
In 1998, the Use synonyms
museum
had more space areas in north - west and Use synonyms
south - east
. The Add a hyphen
south-east
garden
is located in Use synonyms
centre
of the Add an article
the centre
museum
. The Use synonyms
garden
is located on top of the Use synonyms
garden
. In the south, there are temporary Use synonyms
exhibition
room, entrance, shop, toilet and wardrobe. Outside of the Use synonyms
museum
Use synonyms
has
Verb problem
are
exhibition
rooms.
After some developments in 2008, there have been some changes. In Use synonyms
north-west
, empty places have been constructed Add an article
the north-west
Change preposition
for restaurant
restaurant
. Wardrobe, shops and temporary rooms have been replaced from east to west. The toilet has been converted beside the cafe. The restaurant and wardrobe Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
locate
in the corner of the north and south-west respectively. The Wrong verb form
are located
garden
was erected sitting area and planted fountains. In the east absolutely demolished. The entrance and Use synonyms
exhibition
rooms haven't been modernized.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, exhibition, garden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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