The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the annual
water
consumption that has been chosen in certain cities and the pie chart describes the distribution of Australia's
water
consumption for the previous year.
Overall
, Perth consumed the highest amount of
water
for og agriculture and Canberra has been utilized the lowest level of
water
during the period.
To begin
, the bar chart shows Perth city was using 300 kilolitres of
water
, followed by Brisbane using 250
litres
. Adelaide and Sydney were similar at around 200
litres
.
In addition
, Melbourne was at 150
litres
and Carberra utilized approximately 120
litres
of
water
consumed in the
last
year.
Moreover
,looking at the pie chart shows more than half
litres
of H20 used for agricultural land at 67%.People exhausted 9% were supplied for household purposes.
water
supply, sewage and drainage including electricity and gas for 77% each. Other supplies recorded at 4%.
Finally
, mining exhausted 21% over the year.
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