The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future.
The map above illustrates
comparison
between the current placement of a college and the construction plan Add an article
a comparison
the comparison
to
the college site in 2020
It clearly can be seen that Change preposition
for
from
the plan map shows several changes compared to the current building. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, couple
of classrooms will be added and Change the article
a couple
parking
Correct article usage
the parking
area
will be widened in future.
In the future, the entrance will be moved to the south area
whilst currently
it's on Add a comma
currently,
north
side of Add an article
the north
building
. Add an article
the building
a building
On the contrary
, the present toilet is in bottom
corner directly facing the entrance and soon will be placed Add an article
the bottom
to
the top corner Change preposition
in
replaced
the current entrance. Wrong verb form
replacing
In addition
, there will be two new classrooms and will be located in the present reception and the library location, so the reception will be smaller and moved to the centre of the main building and the library will be on left
side exactly after the door.
Currently, Correct article usage
the left
parking
Add an article
the parking
area
at college
can contain only four cars at maximum, so the university plans to destroy the footpath and the garden in order to Correct article usage
the college
constructs
Change the verb
construct
larger
parking Correct article usage
a larger
area
, therefore
six cars can fit into the car park. Building
will have a new shop in Add an article
The building
left
corner that previously was Add an article
the left
lunch
Correct article usage
the lunch
area
, so the lunch area
will be smaller and can be found by walking through entry
door. The lunch Add an article
the entry
area
will be placed in
Change preposition
on
left
side exactly before the shop.Correct article usage
the left
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