Students in a school should learn academic subjects and pass exams. Other skills such as cookery, dressmaking, and woodwork can be learned from family and friends. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that students can learn skills

such

as cookery, tailoring,

woodwork

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from their family and peers,

while

taking academic subjects and passing them must be done at school. I believe that if former mentioned skills were fully developed through professional classes,

this

would benefit people's lifestyle and career growth

as well as

avoid dangerous situations.

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essay will

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discuss why I support

this

viewpoint and provide a conclusion.

To begin

, most people who could not afford to go to school

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tend to fall on what they have learned when they were young,

this

includes

carpenting

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carpeting

and cooking.

As a result

, they find

a low-paying jobs

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low-paying jobs

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in a construction firm or an eatery that

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give

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them

lesser

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opportunities to improve their ways of living.

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if they have taken short courses, which are given by most governments for free, it would be

benifical

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beneficial

for those who want to apply

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international companies. Take cookery

for instance

, a lot of individuals find an opportunity to work

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cruiseships

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cruise ships

, which

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known for their huge compensation and benefits for employees. Another reason why I disagree

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this

notion is that having an educational background about these

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of work may give them deeper knowledge to prevent potential accidents

while

working.

For example

, welding could be

extremely

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dangerous job if it was not learned properly.

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could seriously burn various parts of a person's body because of the heat

that is

used to connect metals, even just looking at the (fireworks-like) could easily damage the eyes.

Therefore

, it is vital to learn these at educational institutions.

To conclude

,

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learning skills

such

as cooking and welding from those people around them may give them basic knowledge. In my opinion, acquiring proper classes not only could help them to progress in their career and receive a higher salary

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but

also

provide them knowledge on how to prevent hurting themselves

while

working.