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Parents should be actively involved in their child’s education. Do you agree or disagree?

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In my opinion,
parents
 should be actively involved in their child's education.
PARENTS
 SHOULD REPRESENT THE MOST IMPORTANT SUPPORT OVER A CHILD GROWTH. I WOULD AGREE WITH THE LATTER ARGUMENT AND IN
THIS
 ESSAY I WILL SUPPORT MY VIEW WITH EXAMPLES. The first reason is that some children are very talented but
also
 they are very lazy.
Accordingly
,
parents
 should push them to study.
For example
, I am lazy. I think that being lazy is not a bad thing.
On the contrary
, it is a very good thing. Lazy people find an easy solution to everything.
This
 makes their lives easier. If it were up to me, I wouldn't study. My
parents
 pushed me to study.
Furthermore
, education starts at home and the things learned from early childhood become part of someone's personality and characteristics.
Parents
 should be careful about teaching their kids moral values and responsibilities to society. These things do not teach in school, children should learn them from their
parents
 at home. For these two reasons,
i
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 believe that
parents
 should be actively involved in their child’s education.
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