You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: •explain the reason for the party • give the date and time of the party • suggest what the classmate could bring to the party Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Wesley, Long time no see. I’ve been looking for you since the start of the vacation to have fun after hectic
end of semester
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exams but no info on your whereabouts. By the way, I wanted to tell you that I am throwing a surprise birthday celebration for your close friend James. He was looking sad the
last
time I saw him in the mall. Luckily, I found out that his birthday is just around the corner, and
this
will be an awesome opportunity to dazzle him out from his ongoing sadness and major family missing. I have booked a table at “Out of the
moon
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” to have a weekend on the razzle from Friday 8 PM onwards, 3rd October. But,
fun
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the fun
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starts right from 4 PM by calling him to come
at
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the package pickup location near
pool
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the pool
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, and
then
we throw a surprise
birtday
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birthday
cake cutting ceremony after playing some haunted music. I’ve left no stones unturned to
get’ll
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get
buddies from our group,
however
, more guests are
welcomed
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to make it exciting. Right after that, we are having a pool party
,
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and will urge our classmates to get woofers for the same, with some snacks and food. Can’t wait to catch you
along with
your friends and scare the hell out of James with the
most
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grandest birthday surprise. Take care, Fred
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