You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: •explain the reason for the party • give the date and time of the party • suggest what the classmate could bring to the party Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Wesley, Long time no see. I’ve been looking for you since the start of the vacation to have fun after hectic

end of semester

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exams but no info on your whereabouts. By the way, I wanted to tell you that I am throwing a surprise birthday celebration for your close friend James. He was looking sad the

last

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time I saw him in the mall. Luckily, I found out that his birthday is just around the corner, and

this

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will be an awesome opportunity to dazzle him out from his ongoing sadness and major family missing. I have booked a table at “Out of the

moon

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Moon

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” to have a weekend on the razzle from Friday 8 PM onwards, 3rd October. But,

fun

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the fun

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starts right from 4 PM by calling him to come

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the package pickup location near

pool

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the pool

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, and

then

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we throw a surprise

birtday

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birthday

cake cutting ceremony after playing some haunted music. I’ve left no stones unturned to

get’ll

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get

buddies from our group,

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, more guests are

welcomed

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to make it exciting. Right after that, we are having a pool party

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and will urge our classmates to get woofers for the same, with some snacks and food. Can’t wait to catch you

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your friends and scare the hell out of James with the

most

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grandest birthday surprise. Take care, Fred

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Oct 6, 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

225 words

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