some
argue that
kids
should not be used for advertisement
however
it affects them in several negative ways.
this
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this
issue.
In modern
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advertisements
play
aChange the article
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important role, which you can see
them Correct pronoun usage
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in your daily life in many forms - on TV,
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, social platforms, apps, radios, billboards, magazines, shopping malls and more. some companies
aimedWrong verb form
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kids
for their commercial purposes
however
argue that it
affectChange the verb form
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them from
negativeCorrect article usage
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sidesFix the agreement mistake
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.
for example
, some sugary breakfast cereals which are not healthy use
favoriteChange the spelling
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cartoon characters in their
advertisements
. when children watch, it
influenceChange the verb form
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them and they think it is a good thing that we can buy.
moreover
, when
parents
say no it makes anger on them.
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they feel
disappointChange the form of the verb
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with their
parents
.
however
,
commercials
think about
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whichCorrect word choice
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they can make. even they know most of
timeAdd an article
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some
parents
can not say "no" to
kids
and they
obligeWrong verb form
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to buy
such
things.
on the other hand
,
parents
should explain to
kids
that we can not buy anything we see in
advertisements
. they try to make you buy something. they always try to influence the way you think. even in
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, every year 1.1$ billion is spent
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such
advertisements
. some
parents
argue
thisChange preposition
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issue but it has not
concludedAdd a missing verb
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yet. most
parents
can avoid
such
problems
with limitChange preposition
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watching
youtubeCorrect your spelling
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or
tvCorrect your spelling
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commercials
. at least children 3-6 should not watch anything without
approvalAdd an article
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of their
parents
.
in
,
commercials
are
undeniableAdd an article
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part of our
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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.
iChange the capitalization
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hope in the future companies will decrease
such
commercials
and make
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more
carefullyChange the word
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forChange preposition
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kid's
benefitsFix the agreement mistake
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.