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One of your penfriends wants to imporve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

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Hello dear friend, I hope you are doing well, as far as I
hear
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 from Jeny
that
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you want to improve your English. Really nice, I am happy for you.
Also
, Jeny said that you will move to Sydney. People
prefer
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who prefer
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 to go to Sydney who wants learn
English
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the English
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 language.
In addition
, it would help to understand new
culture
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 and meet new people.
On the other hand
, you can invest
for
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 your secular future. In my opinion, you
make
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a practise all
skills
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the skills
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such
 as listening and speaking,
besides
 that it would be helpful for your vocabulary knowledge. That's why, I am happy for you.
However
, you should think about course costs, because you will spend a lot of money
for
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 some facilities.
For instance
,
accomondation
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accommodation
, transportation and food. In summary, I believe that education will be very useful for your
languge
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language
 skills. If you improve your all skills you can find
good
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 job
ang
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and
 you can earn
good
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 salary.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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