One of your penfriends wants to imporve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

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Hello dear friend, I hope you are doing well, as far as I

hear

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from Jeny

that

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you want to improve your English. Really nice, I am happy for you.

Also

, Jeny said that you will move to Sydney. People

prefer

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who prefer

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to go to Sydney who wants learn

English

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the English

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language.

In addition

, it would help to understand new

culture

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cultures

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and meet new people.

On the other hand

, you can invest

for

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your secular future. In my opinion, you

make

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apply

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a practise all

skills

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the skills

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such

as listening and speaking,

besides

that it would be helpful for your vocabulary knowledge. That's why, I am happy for you.

However

, you should think about course costs, because you will spend a lot of money

for

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some facilities.

For instance

accomondation

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accommodation

, transportation and food. In summary, I believe that education will be very useful for your

languge

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language

skills. If you improve your all skills you can find

good

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job

ang

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and

you can earn

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salary.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

160 words

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One of your penfriends wants to imporve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

The Closing

Art is a skill and a talent and so it should not be taught at universities. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that all entertainment TV programme should educate people about the importance of social issue. To what extent do your agree or disagree.

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music and others not. Discuss both view and your opinion.

Some people think that it is better for a country's economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.