The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest.
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can be ostensibly seen that technologies are increasing Correct pronoun usage
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day-to day
life because Add a hyphen
day-to-day
of
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it
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they
offers
fruitful Correct subject-verb agreement
offer
information
and plenty of skills. Moreover
, the
cyberspace has been spread all over the place Correct article usage
apply
due to
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that it
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creates
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creating
to
every Change preposition
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masses
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essay, I will completly
agree with Correct your spelling
completely
this
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why Correct your spelling
statement
misinformations
and fake news are growing Fix the agreement mistake
misinformation
up
but it can be solved by Change preposition
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tha
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the
authority
and Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
people
understanding.
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people's
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with, there are some heckers
who send Correct your spelling
hackers
to
false Change preposition
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information
in the e-mail such
as job offer letter
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letters
in
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with
less
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lower
the
prices Correct article usage
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as a result
, people
believe that when people
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their money to Change preposition
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the
fraud person they think that the person is trustworthy Correct article usage
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nontheless
it could cause more complications in their carrier . Correct your spelling
nonetheless
For instance
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student
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students
who
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want
to go Change the verb form
wants
in
other countries so they suspect that lie Change preposition
to
information
must be crucial for them but it can create lots of demarits
in their life.Despite Correct your spelling
demerits
this
, surging the
cybercrime hacking, Correct article usage
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people
feel anxiety and depression that causing numerous death reasult
in upcoming years.
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result
Moreover
, this
can be solved by talking with the government and properly gaining education by textmessage
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text message
birthdate
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birthdates
.
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hence
, it can be tackled properly if crowd
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the crowd
this
rules. Correct determiner usage
these
For example
, State
Bank of India figured out like if any person who Correct article usage
the State
ask
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asks
about
bank detail or any mobile number in order to Change preposition
for
this
information
should not have to sent
to the Add a missing verb
be sent
reciever
as they can fraud easily with themCorrect your spelling
receiver
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, therefore,
therefore
being carefull
in any call Correct your spelling
careful
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the hackers may be prevented usually.
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To sum up
, Although
cyberspace lead
to more issue, it can be solved by not only the politician but Change the verb form
leads
also
the students by sending proper
message in their mobile phones. what is more, In Add an article
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the proper
this
essay, I determined that lie information
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,
providing proper knowledge via education so it will be clarified .Remove the comma
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