The maps below show the Happy Valley Shopping Center in 1982 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate how Happy Valley Shopping
centre
developed over two different Capitalize word
Centre
time
between 1982 to 2012
Change to a plural noun
times
Overall
, it is clear that
there was
a number of changes , Correct subject-verb agreement
were
the
most notably the lake was demolished and Correct article usage
apply
replaceced
by furniture retail . Correct your spelling
replaced
Addictionally
, the parking lot was added in the left corner of the map
In the first picture , there was a lake which was surrounded by many trees and next to the entrance . Entering the entrance , the lobby Correct your spelling
Additionally
area
was between the cofffee
shop and Correct your spelling
coffee
toilets
. In front of the lobby Correct article usage
the toilets
area
, there was an entertainment area
which was in the centre of the shopping centre . There was a shop food store
at
the North of the map . Change preposition
on
While
to the south there were 4 elevators to 2nd
floor , the Correct article usage
the 2nd
sport
Change the noun form
sports
store
, electronic store
, furniture store
can be seen in the East
In 2012 , the parking lot was destroyed inn
the left corner of the map . The furniture retail was constructed to replace the lake . Entering the entrance , the lobby Correct your spelling
in
area
and coffee shop had been knocked down while
the entertainment area
and toilet still existed . The food store
in the north had been replaced by the sports store
and electronics store
. The store
area
in the West was divided into four sides , on the south side , there was the food store
and theme restaurant .Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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