Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Certainly, I have seen

few

Correct article usage

a few

show examples

students who go

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

overseas where they learn different

type

Fix the agreement mistake

types

show examples

of skills and

also

Linking Words

culture.

Moreover

Linking Words

, some tutor

ponder

Change the verb form

ponders

show examples

that going to other countries offer more merits than

demarits

Correct your spelling

demerits

. In

this

Linking Words

essay, I partially agree with

this

Linking Words

statement because students can learn different language skills or culture

prospectives

Correct your spelling

prospects

show examples

even though, they feel homesickness

as well as

Linking Words

expensive things in their surroundings and I will explain clearly what the reason behind

this

Linking Words

statements

Fix the agreement mistake

statement

show examples

.

Add a missing verb

is.

show examples

There are numerous reasons why

teacher

Fix the agreement mistake

teachers

show examples

opine that going to another country would be beneficial for them.

First

Add an article

The first

show examples

and foremost reason is that

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

If student go the other nations where they could learn the

linguistick

Correct your spelling

linguistic

linguistics

skill and they can grow their carrier in their future.

Moreover

Linking Words

, when pupil go the other cities

where

Rephrase

apply

show examples

Linking Words

then

Correct your spelling

they

show examples

look at different

culture

Fix the agreement mistake

cultures

show examples

such

Linking Words

as

there

Correct your spelling

their

show examples

dressing sense, and

Linking Words

also

Rephrase

apply

show examples

their food styles.

As a result

Linking Words

, it could be

must

Correct article usage

a must

show examples

to grow their personality

in addition

Linking Words

to their

carrier

Correct your spelling

career

show examples

goals.

For instance

Linking Words

,

scientist

Fix the agreement mistake

scientists

show examples

showed that few students who go to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

other

country which

Replace the word

countries

show examples

can build more knowledge

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

them

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

to grow their power.

Hence

Linking Words

, going to different

territory

Fix the agreement mistake

territories

show examples

must be

fruitful

Add an article

the fruitful

a fruitful

show examples

situation for them. On

other

Correct article usage

the other

show examples

legitimate side, learner can

cause

Verb problem

have

show examples

some disastrous

impact

Fix the agreement mistake

impacts

show examples

in

Change preposition

on

show examples

their life when they leave their home. To commence with,

this

Linking Words

situation may

leads

Change the verb form

lead

show examples

to homesickness if they prefer to go without their family or

cowerker

Correct your spelling

coworkers

.

In addition

Linking Words

learner

Fix the agreement mistake

learners

show examples

would pay

huge

Correct article usage

a huge

show examples

amount of money if they take

well

Rephrase

apply

show examples

-

Correct article usage

a furnished

show examples

furnished

Correct your spelling

well-furnished

show examples

house

as a result

Linking Words

which can

consider

Verb problem

cause

show examples

more

anixet

Correct your spelling

anxiety

and sickness.

For example

Linking Words

, A few newspaper has shown that some student

takes

Verb problem

make

show examples

wrong decisions about their life because of feeling

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

alone in the nation.

To sum up

Linking Words

,

Even-though

Correct your spelling

even although

show examples

student

Fix the agreement mistake

students

show examples

gain more fruitful pros from

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

overseas , it has some cons like feeling

sickness

Replace the word

sick

show examples

without their family members.

Therefore

Linking Words

, I assumed that in

this

Linking Words

essay there are more advantages

outweigh

Verb problem

apply

show examples

than disadvantages.