The table below gives information about the average number of servings of ice cream sold each day in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information about the average number of servings of ice cream sold each day in two different years. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table compared the average
sales
of
ice
cream
in 2015 and 2016 from April to
September
in Springer’s Cafe.
Overall
, from both years, the highest
sales
were in July 2016, and the lowest was in April 2015. In 2015, the same
number
of
ice
cream
was sold in May and
September
.
Furthermore
, the
ice
cream
sales
increased from April to August 2015 and plunged in
September
. Meanwhile, from April to July 2016, it rose and started to decrease in August and
September
. The data in 2015 showed an increased trend in the serving of
ice
cream
from April to August. It began with 15 servings per day, which was the least
number
of
sales
in two different years and grew to 60 servings, the top deals – most successful in 2015. Unfortunately, it plummeted to merely 25
ice
cream
served in
September
, the same
number
as in May. The
ice
cream
sales
rose from April to July 2016. It was 25
ice
creams on average per day in April to 80 in July, the best deals in both years.
In addition
, in August, it decreased by five
ice
cream
to 75 and continued to fall to 30 servings of
ice
cream
in
September
.
Moreover
, the small
number
of
ice
cream
sales
in 2016 was 25, and it happened in April.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, ice, cream, september, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number of servings
  • compared to
  • trend
  • increase/decrease in sales
  • consistent pattern
  • seasonal variations
  • notable discrepancies
  • significant differences or similarities
  • external factors
  • consumer preferences
  • economic factors
  • notably higher or lower sales
  • promotions
  • spikes or declines
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