7.The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart below displays the
proportion
of different age
ranges who visited the cinema in a specific nation between 1978 and 2008.
Overall
, individuals in age
group 14 to 24 dropped slightly. Add an article
the age
While
people
more than 50 years
old increased significantly and an obvious fall in the proportion
of all ranges can be watched
in 1988.
In 1999 all Verb problem
seen
age
ranges faced a decline, people
from 14-25 decreased modestly by 15% while
the other age
groups went down by 20%. During 1978, only two fifths
of Add a hyphen
two-fifths
people
belonging to 50+
Correct article usage
the 50+
age
group went to the theatre, in the next decade it faced a dramatically
plunge and peaked at half, but Change the adverb
dramatic
then
experienced a rise, which in 1998 returned to 40%. For the next five years
the proportion
remained stable and the
Change preposition
in the
last
to
five Change preposition
apply
years
it grew around 10%.
Individuals with
Change preposition
in
age
range between 14 and 24 had the highest percentage of Correct article usage
the age
people
who went to the cinema, starting the period with 90%, but in 1988, a decline of approximately a quarter happened. Afterwards, it rapidly climbed back to 90% and remained stable until 2003. In the last
5 years
the Add a comma
years,
proportion
went down again by nearly 10%, ending the period with around 81%, maintaining to be the group which visits the cinema the most.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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