18.Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other. But others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, technological
develpment
made drastic variations in our society. And, it is argued that recent social Correct your spelling
development
developments
circumstanaces
make individuals more reliable to others or not. Correct your spelling
circumstances
This
essay will show you the
both sights of it and, I totally agree with the idea that individuals are independent of each other these days.
To commence with, many Remove the article
apply
people
insist that human beings are dependent. The rate of contact with others is increased if we compare it to the past. Because of the progress of techonology
, we don't have a limitation of time and distance Correct your spelling
technology
while
contacting someone anymore. Correct word choice
when
For example
, you can watch people
who come from different countries communicate easily by using talking apps. In addition
, you can talk with your friends or family in cyberspace even if you're not with them in reality and people
upload their recent life by using social apps.
However
, I literally consider that the public is independent now. In the past, people
have worked and studied together in the same place. On the other hand
, overcoming the situation of the corona, people
were get used to meet in
online even if communication is constituted with expression of face. Wrong verb form
meeting
For example
, teachers use Zoom or other online teaching programs to give lectures to their students. Moreover
, workers give feedback by using messenger and it results in a lack of communication about their privacy.
In conclusion, because of
the number of contacts Change preposition
apply
are
increasing, it can be said that Change the verb form
is
recent
generation is dependent Correct article usage
the recent
to
others. Change preposition
on
However
, because people
are focused on contacting with
cyberspace using electronics Change preposition
apply
such
as mobile phones, it can be said that they don't have enough chance to participating
in real communication in the same place.Change the form of the verb
participate
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