A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited Describe where you stayed and what you can do there Provide one negative aspect about the destination Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

Dear Isobel, I hope you are doing great. I was so happy to receive your letter and know that you are coming to visit Spain. Unfortunately, I won't be able to see you as I am very busy at work.
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recommend you a place to visit. As you know, I go every summer to Bilbao. It's one of my favourite cities in Spain and I'm sure you'll love it as well. It is a lively city with hundreds of things to do and it's
sorrounded
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surrounded
by great nature. I normally stay at the Nido Grande Hotel, which I completely recommend.
Although
it's located near the main square of the city, it's still a quiet area. There are lots of bars and restaurants within
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walking distance where you can enjoy the famous pintxos.
Also
, I'd recommend you to visit the Guggenheim
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, as it is one of the most relevant
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regarding
contemporary art. The only bad thing about
this
great city is that the weather is normally rainy and cloudy. So, make sure that you bring your umbrella with you. Enjoy your holidays. Best wishes, SARA.
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Provide more specific information about the negative aspect of the destination

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