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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

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Small local retailers are finding it hard to compete against big shop chains, which is causing negative effects on local
communities
.
This
 essay will discuss
consequences
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as well as
 provide solutions regarding
this
 matter. After large
shops
as well as
 online
shops
 started to spread across countries offering larger selection of products for lower prices compared to small-scale
shops
, most
of
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the
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people started to prefer them over local ones.
This
 change caused economic problems for many local business owners leaving them out of work.
Besides
 that, often local retailers have produced traditional items or foods that helped to preserve local culture. The problem with large supermarkets is that local culture is influenced by mass cultures losing its uniqueness in the worst scenario causing changes in local
communities
. To minimize
negative
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the negative
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 effects that larger
shops
 are bringing to local
communities
, there are
few
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 solutions.
Main
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 one
being
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, offering small businesses the possibility to sell their products in large
shops
 with the condition that they will get a big part of the sales.
This
 way, local entrepreneurs will be secured with income and local products will be sold to consumers for possibly lower prices. Another idea is to organize different public campaigns or social events to promote local farmers and designers to raise interest and awareness of the public about the whole matter. When these methods are combined, all the counterparts will get their profits
as well
as
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 the local community will maintain to preserve its local ingredients, handcrafts and traditions.
To conclude
, larger supermarkets are causing more economic difficulties for local businesses
as well as
 negatively affecting the cultural heritage of the local
communities
 that have their organic ingredients
as well as
 crafts. To limit these impacts, local events should be organized and bigger
shops
 should work
together with
 locals selling locally produced items and foods to secure the economic income of people in the area.
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