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As a result of tourism, many historical buildings and sites are being damaged beyond repair. What could be done to prevent this?

#tourism #buildings #sites #repair
There is no denying that the impact of tourism plays a crucial role in any country.
Although
 It is invaluable for either the economy or demonstrating its cultural values to the world, damaged
buildings
 and sites cannot be rejuvenated, which is one of the most important issues for anyone. The following paragraphs discuss solutions
about
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 preventing these disruptive actions.
Firstly
, I strongly agree with the idea that even if everyone is not blithe to damage the environment, the volume of tourists must be controlled by the government until it controls them. Obeying the rules,
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 some guidelines which are created by local authorities in any range of areas can reduce some congestion problems that are beneficial to keep all historical
buildings
 as fresh
one
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. Alternatively, these guides can be accomplished from some big communities that lots of countries are subscribed to, like NATO, European Nations, SCO etc.
Secondly
, many support the view that if any country suffers from keeping
buildings
 new, there must be a local organization to set some boundaries about them. From my perspective, from the assumption,
this
 organization can designate people who are in charge of authority to admit someone to visit these sites only under some settlements as
like
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 the previous point.
Also
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 some places that are under dangerous renovation should be disallowed to be seen by tourists. In summary, historical
buildings
 are our reminders about our past, and
also
 our future. We need to be aware of protecting them, and in a
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 we should protect them as some people did
it
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apply
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before us.
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