Write a letter to your friend who is visiting a city that you know well. Recommend Places worth visiting Where to eat How to get around the city

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Dear Cassie I'm so excited that you are coming to visit

Melbourne

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next week. There are so many things to see and do here. As you know

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have lived here for so long a pretty much know the place like the back of my hand. So

further

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apply

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here are some cool

place

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places

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to visit, see and eat

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you are here. Three places I think you should go see in

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melbourne

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Melbourne

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Phillip Island and the

panguins

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. It's so much fun to witness. The second place I'd

recomend

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recommend

is the

Melbourne

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Convention Centre it currently has some great comic conventions on

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apply

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the moment, as I know

your

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you

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into Anime and gaming.

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I'd

recomend

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recommend

catching the

Melbourne

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you are down here, there is so much to see and do there. From animals to rollercoaster rides, so much fun. We have so many great

restrunts

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restaurants

here in

Melbourne

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. So finding something to eat here is quite a challenge. But I'd recommend, Hot Pot if

your

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you're

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looking for

asian

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Asian

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food. Higher Ground for coffee and breakfast. But when you get here I can recommend places that you feel like eating.

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, how to get around the city.

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is quite easy as we have a tram system

that is

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free around and in the city so catching trams is one of the

most

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easiest ways to get around here. other

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then

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that I drive and can take you wherever you need to go. I hope

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helps Cassie,

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I cant

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cant

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can't

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wait to see you. Love Katie

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

258 words

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The Closing

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