In some cutures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this messages.

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In some
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cultures
, children are often given the
message
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that as long as they
work
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hard, they can accomplish anything. I believe sending them them
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message
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may increase their chances
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of success
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in
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and
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help them to grow as a person. The main
downsides
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may be that
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can deprive them of a happy childhood and even make them doubt
themsalves
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themselves
. On the positive side, the
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in question may help increase
children
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children's
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odds of success in
life
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. It can make them believe in their talent and abilities.
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self-assurance can motivate them to
work
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hard to move toward their goal. They may
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experience
personal growth in the process. When they commit to a goal, they learn to become,
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, more accountable and resourceful in order to make it
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. Abilities like
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can be valuable in their personal
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their future professional lives. On the negative side, telling children they can realize any of their
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through hard
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may prevent them from enjoying their childhood. They may devote all their free time to pursuing their goal, leaving
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little
time to have fun with their peers.
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message
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lead
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to self-doubt.
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Children
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young to be mentally strong enough to face big
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failures
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in
life
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. the fact that they fail
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despite
all the hard
work
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may lead them to doubt their ability and intelligence. In conclusion, telling
chilldren
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children
anything is
acheviable
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achievable
if they
putt
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put
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enough
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in enough
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effort may raise their odds of
successes
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success
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in
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and
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help them in their personal growth.
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, it may
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come with the disadvantages of
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causing
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self doubt
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self-doubt
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and keeping them away from having a happy childhood.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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