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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.
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The given line graph describes the comparison of the amounts of
wheat
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 exported in
Australia
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, Canada, and the European Community over a period of five years, from 1985 to 1990. The unit is measured in millions of tons. It can be seen from the graph that the value of
wheat
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 exports in three regions fluctuated.
While
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 the volume of
wheat
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 exported by the European Community increased, the figure for Canada varied and that of
Australia
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 decreased.
In addition
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,
it is clear that
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 the exported
wheat
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 of
Australia
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 was considerably lower compared with other areas. The
wheat
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 export value of Canada dropped slightly from 19
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985 to 17
million
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tonnes
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 the following year,
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 increased significantly to 25
million
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tonnes
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 in 1988. After some variations, the value of
wheat
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 exports was 19
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990. In Europe countries, there was a marginal reduction in the export of
wheat
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 between 1985 and 1986, from about 17 to 14
million
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tonnes
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. From here, it rose substantially to 21
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990. The total tally of
wheat
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 exports in
Australia
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 witnessed slow growth between 1985 and 1986, from 15 to over 16
million
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tonnes
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, before declining steadily to more than 10
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990.
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