Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.

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Experimentation shows that people's characteristics are more depend on genetics than
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we have through different situations in life. I totally agree with the latter viewpoint. On the one hand, it is already proved that offspring tend to have some of the characteristics of their parents. Genes are responsible for having common things in parents and their children.
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, if parents are angry and violent in nature
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there is a 30 % possibility of a child having the same
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the research of Toronto University.
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, there is a saying like begets like means we became the same atmosphere around us.
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, if children grow up in an atmosphere where everyone is rude and becomes violent in small things
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the offspring get used to it
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growing
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they tend to be attracted towards crime.
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, good guidance and companionship can lead to having good characteristics in a child. Everyone faces difficult
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in the initial period when they begin with something new and it has huge flourishment on one's personality to develop
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. But there are few individuals who are not influenced by the result of any situation and
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and remain as good as they are. In many cases, the children saw crime happening and traumatic memories affect them throughout their lives. In conclusion, genetic things may bring some character with them in offspring but the lifelong
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they face in their life play a vital role in one's personality and development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nature vs. nurture debate
  • genetic inheritance
  • personality traits
  • behavior patterns
  • heritability
  • twins studies
  • malleable characteristics
  • upbringing
  • environmental influences
  • critical periods
  • language acquisition
  • worldview
  • innate traits
  • personal experiences
  • psychological development
  • epigenetics
  • adaptive behaviors
  • cultural imprinting
  • temperament
  • social conditioning
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