The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999

The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
time
dedicated to viewing television in different
age
groups (from 4 years old to over 65 years old) for both males and females in(in the UK in 1995 and 1999).
Overall
, the
time
spent watching TV in England experienced an upward trend for women in all
age
groups, except for men in the childhood, teenage, and adult
age
groups. The highest amount of
time
allocated for watching TV was among the elderly,
while
the lowest was in the children
age
group
. Looking into detail, individuals in the over-65
age
group
dedicated the most
time
to watching TV, accounting for over 30
hours
per
week
, compared to those in the 4-15
age
group
who only contributed under 20
hours
per
week
.
Similarly
, those in the 55-64
age
group
spent over 25
hours
weekly,
while
those in the 45-54
age
group
spent below 25
hours
over the given period.
Furthermore
, individuals in the 25-34
age
group
allocated just under 26
hours
per
week
, compared to those in the 4-15
age
group
who only contributed under 20
hours
per
week
.
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