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The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999

The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of
time
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 dedicated to viewing television in different
age
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 groups (from 4 years old to over 65 years old) for both males and females in(in the UK in 1995 and 1999).
Overall
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, the
time
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 spent watching TV in England experienced an upward trend for women in all
age
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 groups, except for men in the childhood, teenage, and adult
age
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 groups. The highest amount of
time
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 allocated for watching TV was among the elderly,
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 the lowest was in the children
age
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group
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. Looking into detail, individuals in the over-65
age
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group
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 dedicated the most
time
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 to watching TV, accounting for over 30
hours
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 per
week
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, compared to those in the 4-15
age
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group
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 who only contributed under 20
hours
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 per
week
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.
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, those in the 55-64
age
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group
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 spent over 25
hours
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 weekly,
while
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 those in the 45-54
age
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group
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 spent below 25
hours
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 over the given period.
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, individuals in the 25-34
age
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group
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 allocated just under 26
hours
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 per
week
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, compared to those in the 4-15
age
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group
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 who only contributed under 20
hours
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 per
week
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, age, group, hours, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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