The diagram below shows how the australian bureau of meterology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a University lecturer describing information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the australian bureau of meterology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

Write a report for a University lecturer describing information shown below.
The provided flowchart depicts the process of gathering real-time data by the meteorology department of Australia
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so that accurate weather predictions are produced.
Overall
, the working of the forecasting system involves four important processes encompassing various elements at each step, all of which work together to provide reliable weather updates to
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Australian citizens.
Firstly
, incoming signals from the radar, satellite and drifting buoy
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collected.
Secondly
, the analysis of data received from these sources is done in the
further
step i.e. analysis and forecasting which comprises evaluating the satellite pictures taken from the satellites, analysing the radar screen and reading the synoptic chart.
Next,
all of these are processed and prepared in the third step which is preparing and broadcasting
this
information by using a computer system.
Lastly
, the weather forecast is broadcasted using various modes
such
as TVs, radios and recorded announcements. After all of
this
is done the listeners and the viewers can get authentic meteorological
forecast
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