The maps below show a section of a university campus in 1990 and now.

The maps below show a section of a university campus in 1990 and now.
The maps given depict a particular directory of the specific university in 1990 and now.
Overall
, it is obvious that there was no indoor sports centre in the past.
Moreover
, there are some spaces that were removed in order to construct new facilities
such
as the park and the parking site. Focusing on the latest indoor arena, the university management built a sports building on the east side of the area which previously was a space for the outdoor pool and the
tennis
court. The swimming pool now become indoor
whereas
the
tennis
courts have been relocated and replaced with a fitness centre.
Besides
, the reception, the cafe, and the changing room remain in operation inside the building with the
last
mentioned being expanded by two times in size. Moving on to some sites that were demolished, in 1990 there was a garden and a car park located in the western part of the area. At the moment, the former was turned into a basketball arena
while
the latter was rebuilt into four
tennis
courts. Both the basketball arena and
tennis
playgrounds are the only remaining facilities placed in the outdoor area. In summary, the college's physical facilities have been considerably improved in terms of convenience and variety since 1990.
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