The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs below represent
change
in owners of households with electrical appliances between 1920-2019. Fix the agreement mistake
changes
Additionally
, number
of hours people do housework every week.
A significant increase is shown in the first Correct article usage
the number
graph
whereas
, the second graph
represents a gradual decrease.
The first graph
presents
that in 1920 no usage of refrigerators Verb problem
shows
were
made. It mushroomed Change the verb form
was
1940
onwards. It increased Change preposition
from 1940
upto
100 percent till Correct your spelling
up to
year
1980. Change the article
the year
whereas
, use
of washing declined during 1980. Correct article usage
the use
However
it showed Add a comma
However,
a
increase Change the article
an
by
15% till 2019.
The second Change preposition
of
graph
shows that in 1920's
Correct article usage
the 1920's
aound
50% of Correct your spelling
around
and
household
used to do housework Fix the agreement mistake
households
such
as washing clothes, preparing meals, cleaning
by themselves. Which Correct word choice
and cleaning
furthermore
decreased by 5% to 10% each year and at last
came to 10% by the year 2019.Submitted by shrivastavatanishka2003 on
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