Pie Chart about the reasons why the young people don't do sports
The cause of the younger generation's lack of participation in sport is plainly shown by the pie chart. There are many causes, but the primary one—that they don'
t
have time to exercise—accounts for 40% of them. A third of the young people don't
participate in the sport since they don't
like it. The percentages of young people who are motivated to play sports and those who are preoccupied with other activities are roughly 10% and 12%, respectively. Finally
, only 5% of people say they don't
participate in sports because they believe it is wasteful to spend money on something that is
already too expensive for themSubmitted by ngovhngoc on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite