People sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason for this? What are the effects on them?

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the development of society and

economy

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,

people

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have more activities and options than in the past which brings some negative and

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positive

impacts on their lives. One of

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is

people

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tend to sleep

less

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hours

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daily.

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essay will explain the reason

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this

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issue and provide some effects on human

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. On the one hand, there are

numberous

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numerous

reasons for

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fact, but the primary one is that

people

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nowadays have more

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than in the past. It is because

people

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have to think a lot more to adapt

with

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the development of technology, which means they have to spend more

times

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to learn

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many new things. The more

stresses

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they have, the

less

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fewer

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hours

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they sleep.

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, the increase of social media might be another reason which caused the lesson of

people

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's sleep.

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,

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a recent study conducted by researchers at

University

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of Sydney, 80% of students sleep less than 8

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per day as they

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time

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with

other

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others

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via social media,

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and only

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20% of other students

they

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sleep more than 8

hours

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per night.

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,

people

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these days tend to sleep less and less.

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,

this

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issue might

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major problems

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human

life

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.

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, less

sleeping

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will cause health problems

such

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as blood and heart

diaeses

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diseases

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,

diabety

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diabetes

and so on as the body does not have enough time to rest and digest the meals properly.

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, it can

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on

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human's

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productivity. Regarding

to

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the

secientists

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scientists

, sleeping less than 5

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everyday

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will reduce the ability

of learning

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to learn

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and working significantly. In conclusion, having enough

sleeping

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daily plays an essential part

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in

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any community,

however

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,

people

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in

this

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modern

life

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tend to sleep less than in the past. In my point of view,

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issue will cause many problems to human

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as long as human health.