In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

Nowadays,

due to

the better financial background, people can do more activities in their free

time

.

For instance

, in several

countries

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teenagers are

suugested

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suggested

to enjoy travelling or having a short-term job in

the

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apply

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leisure before entering

collage

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college

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. In the following

cntent

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content

, I will list the benefits and shortages

about

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of

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this

situation. Either travelling or working are good option to obtain social experience. A school is a protective environment for students, but in the

community

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community,

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there are plenty of unpredictable events

will

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that will

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happen every moment.

For example

, during a journey, travellers will meet various

of

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situations, these could be positive or negative.

Therefore

, you will need to predict and find out the best solution to solve them.

Furthermore

, even if the failure occurs, it still gives the youth food for thought.

However

, it could be

waste

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of

time

from the learning perspective. As a current student, gaining a better academic grade shall be the most vital target, the spare

time

before

collage

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college

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could be a useful interval to do several studies and preparations.

For instance

, if an upcoming freshman

manage

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manages

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their

time

to understand the

keypoint

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key points

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of the subject, knowledge and even their future career, they can be well-prepared

while

entering school. Rather than travelling to an alien place or

work

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working

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in a high-loaded part-

time

job, isn't it a better idea for

student's

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a student's

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future ? In general, there are abundance of notions about how to spend

the

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apply

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leisure before

the

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collage

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college

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. Either

to use

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using

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this

time

to acquire social experience or

be

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being

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knowledgable

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knowledgeable

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about

future

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a future

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career, can have

huge

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a huge

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impact

to

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the teenager's life.

As a result

, before the option

be

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is

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chosen, we should put more attention on the aim.