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The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
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The line graph shows how the
population
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 in
three
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 countries in the state of Oregon in the USA changed between 1940 and 2000.
Overall
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, Washington had
far
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a far
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 higher
population
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 than
Columbia
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 and
Yamhill
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 and the
population
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 growth between 1980 and 2000 was considerably higher. In 1940, the
population
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 of
Columbia
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 was around 28
thousand
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, the lowest among the
three
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 counties in the Oregon state.
Yamhill
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 had a
population
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 of 30
thousand
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while
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 Washington had 75
thousand
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 inhabitants, the highest among these counties. By 1970,
Yamhill
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’s
population
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 increased by 50%
while
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Columbia
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 witnessed about 40%
population
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 increase during the
last
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three
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 decades. At that time, Washington’s
population
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 reached
to
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apply
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nearly 125
thousand
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 which was somewhat double
than
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apply
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the
population
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 of
Yamhill
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 and
Columbia
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 together in
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this
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that
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 year.
Finally
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, in 2000,
Columbia
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 and
Yamhill
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 accommodated roughly 90 and 80
thousand
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 citizens, a noticeable growth
than
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over
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 that of the
last
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three
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 decades. In
this
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 year, Washington’s
population
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 reached
to
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apply
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approximately 250
thousand
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, more than double
than
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apply
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that of
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the 1970’s
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1970’s
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1970s
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, three, columbia, yamhill, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
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