The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
The line graph shows how the
population
in three
countries in the state of Oregon in the USA changed between 1940 and 2000. Overall
, Washington had far
higher Add an article
a far
population
than Columbia
and Yamhill
and the population
growth between 1980 and 2000 was considerably higher.
In 1940, the population
of Columbia
was around 28 thousand
, the lowest among the three
counties in the Oregon state. Yamhill
had a population
of 30 thousand
while
Washington had 75 thousand
inhabitants, the highest among these counties.
By 1970, Yamhill
’s population
increased by 50% while
Columbia
witnessed about 40% population
increase during the last
three
decades. At that time, Washington’s population
reached to
nearly 125 Change preposition
apply
thousand
which was somewhat double than
the Change preposition
apply
population
of Yamhill
and Columbia
together in this
year.
Correct determiner usage
that
Finally
, in 2000, Columbia
and Yamhill
accommodated roughly 90 and 80 thousand
citizens, a noticeable growth than
that of the Change preposition
over
last
three
decades. In this
year, Washington’s population
reached to
approximately 250 Change preposition
apply
thousand
, more than double than
that of Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the 1970’s
1970’s
.Fix apostrophe usage
1970s
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