The maps below show a university campus in 1990 and now. Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a university campus in 1990 and now. Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps demonstrate how a campus in a university has developed in comparison with 1990. Taking into account the area in the south

first,

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a men's dormitory has been expanded two times.

Moreover

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, as the women's dormitory has been demolished, it has been replaced in the east part near the athletic fields. As for the area to the north, there are some noticeable changes can be seen. The map illustrates here that classroom

buildings

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A and B have been modernised into Humanity and Science

buildings

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respectively. What is more, Arts and Music

buildings

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have appeared in the vicinity of the athletic fields.

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modifications were in the university campus. A pond, which is almost in the centre of the map, has been constructed surrounded by bike paths.

In addition

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, it is

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worth mentioning, that the territory of the Library has been dramatically enlarged.

Overall

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, the university campus has become more modern with more facilities available for studying and accommodation.

Buildings

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have been developed and enlarged.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words buildings with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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