The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These illustrated two maps compare changes that had been made from 2007 to 2010 in the
city
hospital intranse and its neighbourhood.
The following charts show facilitated social transportation like Bus stations,building extra Public car park and two new squares for managing traffics around hospitals easily.Use synonyms
On the other hand
, governments have used their equipment in the best way for handling and managing crowded spaces around the Linking Words
City
Hospital.
First of all, during the mentioned years of construction, a new Public car park was created for patients' cars in the east corner of the Hospital and on the right side of Ring Road. Use synonyms
Also
, the Staff car park's location has been unchanged and it is right after the first roundabout of the Hospital and just north of Linking Words
City
Road.
It is Use synonyms
also
worth mentioning that there is a new Bus station for creating new and cheap transportation's way in between two connected squares on the west side of Hospital Road.Linking Words
Finally
, Both parking lots have their own entrance to the Linking Words
City
Hospital.Use synonyms
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