The table below shows personal saving as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2010.

The table below shows personal saving as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2010.
The table diagram depicts the citizens's
saving
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compared with personal
salary
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salaries
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as a
pecentage
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percentage
in developed countries,
such
as Canada, France, Germany,
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etc. Among the 3 periods, it can be seen that Canada
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the lowest
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from 1970 to 2000. From the figures,
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North
America
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countries like Canada and
USA
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the USA
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had the
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rate
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rates
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of
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savings
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which were just 5.6% and 8.2% in 1970 to 1.9% and 4.0% in 2000
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were the top lowest and secondary lowest respectively. Meanwhile, European countries
such
as Germany and UK had
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changes from 13.8% and 9.2% in 1970 to 11.3% and 11.1% in 2000 respectively. All in all, France and Italy had significant
decreses
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decreases
over the period from 18.7% and 29.5% in 1970 to 13.6% and 11.4% in 2000 respectively.
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