Nowadays an increasing number of people working from home instead of going into the office. what are the advantages and the disadvantages for this issue?

It is widely popular, that working from
home
has
became
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the best option rather than going to the office. Having more flexible hours to manage would be the main consideration but there will
also
be some drawbacks. The major benefit of working at
home
is that it would enable easier time management.
In other words
, if someone
do
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the
work
at
home
, there will be some other
house works
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that could be done.
For instance
, the marriage workers,
they
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would be able to look after their young children and
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plenty of time for family activities together.
Moreover
,
home
-workers can
also
save
a
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time for travelling. With no demand
of
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area
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to
work
at, it allows them to
work
anywhere they want to, even at the place where they are having
vacation
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. On the other side, there are obvious disadvantages
in
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doing
work
at
home
.
Firstly
, It would lead to the difficulty
on
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separating between the
home
life and
work
life. When working on
the
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task from the office, it
sometimes
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hard
only
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to focus on it. There are other duties
such
as
home
cleaning,
talk
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to the guest, and so on. These cause some destructions during the working hours.
Secondly
, it would result in no social contact with colleagues.
This
would devastate the team collaboration and
therefore
less contribution
in
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the team project. In conclusion,
although
there are plus points to
having
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work
from
home
, several negative conditions may
also
arise.
This
I think depends on each
individuals
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on what types of
works
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work
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suits them and how they are able to cope with the issues.
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