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Nowadays an increasing number of people working from home instead of going into the office. what are the advantages and the disadvantages for this issue?

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It is widely popular, that working from
home
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 the best option rather than going to the office. Having more flexible hours to manage would be the main consideration but there will
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 be some drawbacks. The major benefit of working at
home
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 is that it would enable easier time management.
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, if someone
do
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 the
work
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 at
home
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, there will be some other
house works
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housework
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 that could be done.
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, the marriage workers,
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would be able to look after their young children and
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 plenty of time for family activities together.
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,
home
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-workers can
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 save
a
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time for travelling. With no demand
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for
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area
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an area
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 to
work
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 at, it allows them to
work
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 anywhere they want to, even at the place where they are having
vacation
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a vacation
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. On the other side, there are obvious disadvantages
in
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 doing
work
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 at
home
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.
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, It would lead to the difficulty
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of
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 separating between the
home
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 life and
work
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 life. When working on
the
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 task from the office, it
sometimes
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is sometimes
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 hard
only
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to focus on it. There are other duties
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 as
home
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 cleaning,
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 to the guest, and so on. These cause some destructions during the working hours.
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, it would result in no social contact with colleagues.
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 would devastate the team collaboration and
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 less contribution
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 the team project. In conclusion,
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 there are plus points to
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working
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work
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 from
home
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, several negative conditions may
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 arise.
This
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 I think depends on each
individuals
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individual
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 on what types of
works
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work
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 suits them and how they are able to cope with the issues.
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