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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

#people #close #relationship #neighbours #contact
The improved technology these days
invent
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invents
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 efficient sources for
people
 to interact with one another,
effortlessly
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and effortlessly
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to
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bond. It is claimed that a close
relationship
 between
people
 in the same community becomes rare when compared to that in the past. Personally, advanced communication alters the means of human interaction. Organising a campaign or activity for the community would encourage
people
 to take part;
this
 could help enhance their
relationship
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relationships
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 among
people
 in the neighbourhood. To start with, prior to advanced technology, staying in a
long distance
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relationship
 has become more convenient and practicable. In any kind of
relationship
,
people
 (neighbours included) do not need to pay a high cost to travel to see one another, it is more convenient nowadays. Even though there are various ways to reach others easily, most
people
 overlook them.
For instance
, thinking that texting a distant friend could be done at all times,
people
 take it later, resulting in becoming a stranger to an old neighbour.
Therefore
, some productive activity should be organised in order to bring
people
 in the local area to meet and socialise.
This
 could work well in any community as a number of
people
 are essential to reach the goal. Once
people
 come and join in, communication and interaction between them occur, which they could realise later that a
relationship
also
 needs personal contact. In conclusion, despite relying on modern communication technology,
people
 in the neighbourhood could become more distant when compared to
this
 in the past. They would take it for granted as they choose an easier means to communicate without realising that a close
relationship
 needs human interaction. To improve
this
,
people
 in the neighbourhood could use some special event where they all can join to create bonding, leading to a close
relationship
.
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