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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#people #habit #books #person
In the era of globalisation and modern technologies more and more
books
.
In addition
, some
people
 think that it is good to read a lot of
books
,
however
, in some humans opinion it depends on the
book
.
Overall
, in both views, there are some plusses and minuses, but I hope the statement reading
book
 is a good
habit
. Nowadays, there are a lot of varied
books
 like historical, anime,literature etc.
Moreover
, some
people
 really enjoy reading a movie,or cartoon
books
.
However
,
this
 kind of
book
 will not improve the skills of education.
This
 means that by reading
this
book
 humans will just lose their gold time.
For instance
, in Japan, just over 30 per cent of
books
 are cartoon
books
.
In addition
,
according to
 the statistics of 2022 year 12000 children in Kazakhstan had problems with psychology,
also
 problem with education because of these
books
, because young guys do not want to read other
books
.
Therefore
,
books
 which were not written by the authors should not be read by humans.
On the other hand
, some
people
 claim to read more and more
books
 is very useful. I think so, because, at minimum, a person will have a good
habit
 of studying.
In other words
, human beings can easily read something without problems.
Furthermore
, it will help for their future. The American research of Steve Jobs showed that if
people
 have a
habit
 of reading
books
, in the future they will not have trouble in reading exams like IELTS and so on.
Consequently
, having
this
 kind of
habit
 is quite good for
people
. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to the conclusion that it is better to read a
book
 than nothing.
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  • mental stimulation
  • knowledge acquisition
  • vocabulary expansion
  • stress reduction
  • memory improvement
  • analytical thinking
  • empathy
  • emotional intelligence
  • social cues
  • constructive content
  • morally uplifting
  • misinformation
  • harmful ideologies
  • critical reading skills
  • credible sources
  • inherently good habit
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