The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing brick for building sectors.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there are seven main steps involved in Linking Words
this
process, beginning with the digging of Linking Words
clay
and ending with the transportation of new Use synonyms
bricks
.
In the first steps of making brick, the Use synonyms
clay
is dug out of the ground by large diggers. After that, the Use synonyms
clay
is put onto mental grids and through a roller and becomes small chunks. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, the Linking Words
clay
is mixed with sand and water before Use synonyms
this
mixture is turned into Linking Words
bricks
by either placing it into a mould or wire cutter.
The next phase begins when the Use synonyms
bricks
are put into an oven for dying from one to two days. Use synonyms
Next,
dried Linking Words
bricks
are heated in kilns at moderate and high temperatures (ranging from 200 to 1300 degrees), followed by the cooling process in the chamber for two or three days and Use synonyms
then
becoming the finished Linking Words
bricks
before being packaged and delivered by truck to different places where they can Use synonyms
used
to for the building industry.Change the verb form
use
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