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Many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings. Do you think this is a good thing?

#people #money #weddings
There are many
people
 that
spending
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spend
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 a huge amount of
money
 on their wedding events. I believe
this
 behaviour is not the best way to celebrate your marriage.
This
 essay will discuss why partners should spend less for a
one time
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event
 and use their surplus on their
honeymoon
 to visit different places. First of all, the revenue of
weddings
 could be extremely expensive because partners want to do the best they have ever visited before.
In contrast
, not only can
people
 do beautiful
weddings
 with a reasonable budget, but
also
 they can enjoy their unique days.
For example
, there is a popular trend in Europe that couples organise
weddings
 with only a small group of close relatives and friends.
Moreover
, they do not invite any
colleauges
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colleagues
 or distant relatives that they do not have regular interactions in their daily lives. It will be great to avoid
to spend
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spending
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 too much on distant
people
 in your life, especially
in
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on
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 your wedding day.
Secondly
, if parters limit their budgets on the
event
, they
can effort for
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cannot afford
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 a
honeymoon
 in a different country or a place which usually costs
expensive
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more
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.
Honeymoon
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A honeymoon
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 is definitely worth
to spend
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spending
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 much more
money
 rather than
wedding
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a wedding
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 because it is an exclusive
event
 between husband and wife.
In
addition
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addition,
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 it is
also
 popular to visit exotic islands
such
 as Bali or Huawei which are considerably expensive for a
honeymoon
. Spending their extra
money
 on visiting these islands will be a great experience.
Thus
, couples can enjoy their special visits
with
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by
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 exploring new places and cultures. In conclusion, despite the fact that many
people
 are spending a huge amount of
money
for
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on
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 their
weddings
, partners should consider
to pay
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paying
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 less for a
one time
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one-time
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 celebration
event
. From my perspective, it would be better to pay their extra
money
to
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for
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honeymoon
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a honeymoon
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instead
 of a crowded celebration.
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