Developing countries require international organizations' help. spme people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are a majority of
nations
which are developing and they do not have a lot of facilitiies
services. Correct your spelling
facilities
Furthermore
, they need international aid. Some people believe that financial help is very necessary but others include
me, think that consultation is useful. I am Wrong verb form
including
giong
to write about both perspectives and give my own ideas.
The third world Correct your spelling
going
countries
all the time require global coorporations'
assist. They do not have Correct your spelling
corporations
convinience
facilities, Correct your spelling
convenience
high quality
technology or knowledge Add a hyphen
high-quality
cause
Correct your spelling
because
of
they Change preposition
apply
do
not able to create these tasks. Change the verb
are
Thus
, some think it is crucial to take lots of money or best
technology from other Correct article usage
the best
countries
in order to develop their nation. For instance
, they cannot produce mobile phone
with Fix the agreement mistake
phones
perfect
Correct article usage
the perfect
version
so they expect Fix the agreement mistake
versions
to
powerful Change preposition
apply
countries
to give them this
kind of technology. In addition
, some nations
do not have precious resources which they can achieve a lot of money so they require other countries
to give them financial help.
Others
individuals have better Correct quantifier usage
Other
thought
Correct subject-verb agreement
thoughts
to change
their Change preposition
about changing
nations
and improve
Wrong verb form
improving
thier
societies. They believe Correct your spelling
their
thier
workers that they can make each device with Correct your spelling
their
high quality
Add a hyphen
high-quality
of
substances but they need some Change preposition
apply
suggestion
in order to arrange Fix the agreement mistake
suggestions
thier
tasks. Correct your spelling
their
for example
, Developing countries
are able to create modern cars that other nations
made them
but because they do not privilege Correct pronoun usage
apply
from
some furmula which is made by intelligent scientists Change preposition
of
so
they cannot construct them. Correct word choice
apply
Therefore
, they think practical assist
and some good advice from them can help them to improve their Replace the word
assistance
nations
. I think efficient help out
can make one country independent and increase their Rephrase
apply
talented
.
In conclusion, It is true that money can modify Replace the word
talent
industry
of Correct article usage
the industry
country
but Correct article usage
a country
attempting by
useful aid from powerful Verb problem
providing
countries
is valusble
.Correct your spelling
valuable
invaluable
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